Research Bali
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hallo oom Ronnie
Thank you for the feedback and for taking time to read my report. I think I understand your points about focus and level of detail. My report was written as things i atuaclly learned/ record of observations and general learning, it was never meant to be subjective and not as a detailed reflection of my work with the company, just the things a learned, i though that would fall into being a journal more then a report.
For all future raports i will try to include a bit off personal reason for why i though something/origin, as to not make things seems surface level, i mostly write based on factual experiences and for personal learning
I appreciate your guidance.
Kind regards,
Dean